The 5-time Rejected Gamma & the Lycan King Reviews

The 5-time Rejected Gamma & the Lycan King

The 5-time Rejected Gamma & the Lycan King

goodfm by: Stina’s Pen

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    La Tricia Franklin

    2023-04-03 06:31:30

    I'm sure it's based on getting the story on paper, so to speak. the audio tells it fine. The English, grammer, and writing major isn't needed. Write your own if you want perfection.

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    finderz bleeperz

    2022-07-05 19:54:44

    This reads very confusingly. The double enters and the continuous commas make it hard to tell who is saying what — and there is at least one part where it reads that Lucy said something when it was really Xandar. Edit, edit, edit. Story is not bad, the writing is TERRIBLE.

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