by: Stina’s Pen
I'm sure it's based on getting the story on paper, so to speak. the audio tells it fine. The English, grammer, and writing major isn't needed. Write your own if you want perfection.
2022-07-05 19:54:44
This reads very confusingly. The double enters and the continuous commas make it hard to tell who is saying what — and there is at least one part where it reads that Lucy said something when it was really Xandar. Edit, edit, edit. Story is not bad, the writing is TERRIBLE.
La Tricia Franklin
2023-04-03 06:31:30