by: Feathers
Whats going to happen when he finds out it is Edna he slept with. Is he going to show compassion for her over Debby. Oh the irony. Please think through your plot before putting pen to paper or fingers to keyboard. Make the plots more sensible and believable.
2023-08-08 20:31:31
She needs to leave him. He slept with another whilst being married to you. He got her pregnant and you are to live with that but her called you a whore when he thought you slept with his brother whilst being married to him. Oh the irony
2023-08-08 20:23:39
They even returned without your knowledge and they are just females without money I might add. You sleep with a woman and in less than a week she is pregnant. You are full of morals but would dump your wife in an heartbeat to marry another. I wonder how you will end this book?
ripton140203
2023-08-08 20:50:53