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Loner to Luna

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    Wicked

    2023-03-08 06:51:04

    are mates before she had even gotten her wolf??? The conversations in this 'novel' sound farfetched-and that's saying setting for a werewolf fantasy genre. Every single conversation sounds like it's from the wild imagination of a wishful prepubescent.

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    Wicked

    2023-03-08 06:46:49

    Respectable, responsible adults wouldn't be okay with-let alone ENCOURAGE their teenagers to fight even if they were werewolves. Stupid scenarios introduced abruptly cause the story to be haphazard and disorienting (a kid suddenly pulling her hair from behind? etc. wtf?). Adam somehow knowing they

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    Wicked

    2023-03-08 06:42:30

    The writing for this is awful. Reads like a middle schooler wrote it. The plot could be neat if all of the jumping to next scenes, jumps in conversation, and everyone knowing everything-and also commenting on it like omnipotent beings didn't distract from it.

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    Doris Snyder

    2022-09-23 22:04:11

    good book so far.

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    Rizsil

    2022-08-17 15:42:54

    Hope her second mate is awesome

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